Friday, August 3, 2012

Kony 2012



I agree to make Joseph Kony famous. Joseph Kony is a criminal who kidnaps children in Uganda. Kony has been doing this since 2003 so now he has kidnapped 30,000 children. The children became soldiers because of Kony. Sometimes Kony kills or tortures them when they do things wrong or when they try to escape. There are two reasons why I agree making Kony famous. The first reason is that Kony is a dangerous criminal that everybody should know and save other innocent lives. Secondly, making Kony famous will make it easy to catch him. Now I will explain you my first reason.
My first reason is that people should know about Kony because he is dangerous criminal. Criminals are very tricky. In the outer side, he or she just looks like a normal person. But in the inner side, they are cruel and evil. Therefore, people should know his face to recognize that he is around us. Plus over 100,000,000 people know that Joseph Kony is a dangerous criminal. Moreover, it will help save other innocent people. How can you save innocent people by making Kony famous? Well, I will explain it to you step by step. First, the Kony 2012 is sing idols or funny videos to spread out the information of Joseph Kony. Next, the people will know Joseph Kony. Then, they will be alerted and warned if Kony is somewhere close to them. Finally, if there is Joseph Kony you can run away from him or call the police to capture him.
Lastly, making Kony famous will make it easy to catch him. Now everybody knows who Joseph Kony is the citizens can call the police when they see any L.R.A. member or Joseph Kony. Then the police can come and capture him. Maybe the citizens will capture Joseph Kony themselves if there are a lot of advantages to them.
Furthermore, the opposing team might say that it will scare people if Kony becomes famous. However, this Kony 2012 is a group that warns people about Joseph Kony. As I said in the first reason, this will save many other innocent lives from Joseph Kony. Also, announcing Kony will make you safer instead of scared because the whole military knows and the military will track him down. Now about 42% of people know Kony.
In conclusion, I agree that making Kony famous has a lot of benefits. And I told you 2 benefits. The first one was that Joseph Kony is a criminal who cannot be left unseen from the people. It is because that Joseph Kony is too dangerous. I also said that innocent people could survive from Joseph Kony by making him famous. Last but not least, it will be much easier to track him down if we make Kony famous. This is why I strongly agree about making Joseph Kony famous.  

3 comments:

  1. Awesome!!! fantastic baby.
    Your writing is improving in structure step by step and more persuading.
    I also agree to your opinion.

    TRY ANOTHER TOPICS
    Keep going

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  2. This essay is well-written. Good job. Your reasonsd are convincing and you included the opposition's side and a rebuttal. Next time include the video "Kony 2012" and more pictures.

    Keep up the great writing!

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